Latest chapter of Sah'ot

Hmm, well I've updated Child of Sah'ot. I'm not sure about Luke's characterisation and Jobin is a continual effort to write, but I bled the thing out finally. Writing about the journey of a Palpatine clone is something I've imagined for a long time but its a strange thing, as he both is and is not Palpatine. I'm costantly debating about how far to take the similarity and how far to distinguish between them. I'd appreciate comments on the characterisation.

Child of Sah'ot